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I also agree with Celto. What I also think you have to improve on is the mouth on the characters. Nowadays the mouth isn't open (that is a huge progress), but instead they have a very painful expression. I mean it look like they are in pain when you look at their mouth. If you could draw it more like how rex does it, I think it would be much better. :)
It'd have to be Hiashi watching Kushina, because everyone flips their shit if they see a naked male that isn't fucking the girl in some way, even though it'd probably make far more sense to have it as Hinata's mother watching Minato.
Would not it be better Hiashi watching Kushina, or the mother of Hinata watching the Minato?
So hinatas mom is fondling herself while peeping on kushina bathing? Would love to see more creative ideas like that. Kushinas drawn perfect but im gonna have to agree with Celtos critique regarding hinatas mom, facial expression doesnt match the situation, if not shyness, there needs to atleast be more excitement.
Are YOU stupid? Just because she is Hinata's mother, does not make her shy. Anyway, she is using her byakugan to peek, no chance of being caught. What is there to be shy about.
Still sticking with boring facial expressions? Hinata's mother could at least be looking a bit shy with what's she's doing.
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