Nice, Darwin!! You are improving very much and very fast. That's very good, but I must agree with the others's criticism and that you need improving. Not meant to hurt you, but just to give you this message
this isnt getting me very hard im sure you will get better but right now your pix arent very good
Hi Darwin, your work seems to be improving quite well. Since you are new to this particular drawing and rendering style there a few things that need to be improved or added in future pictures. Add the detail of notches onto the ends of the nipples. The shapes of belly buttons being drawn are way too big and round. The detail and shape of the pussy needs some improvement; also with the view in this particular picture you should be able to see her anus as well. I hope this constructive feedback helps you for future pictures.
No kidding! From the face alone I had to take a second glance to see which Artist actually drew this. I'm impressed with how quickly he's adapting to Kishimoto's style. Good job with her skin tone: it looks more fleshy rather than one solid color throughout, like her real skin color. I like how its lighter in comparison to Rex's current cloudy-grayish tones; it reminds me of how he used to color, like Mei and Mikoto on the sides. How her vagina is flushed with blood indicating she's turned on is also a real nice touch too:) Very nice Darwin!
That Jutsu doesn't work on me properly. A little constructive critism Darwin: Her body looks kinda flat cause there is little visibel shading. That's also why her navel looks like a hole in her belly. A bit more darker shading around and it'll look better. Use a highlight that is easier to see to give the body more volume and make it seem real. For the pussy, give it more detail. It really is just a slit here. Also work on the faces, don't worry you're not the only artist having trouble with that. Kurotsuchi looks creepy here.
That's not bad but her pussy is...strange lol ! :0 and only those clothes are useless It's better to make full-nude in my opinion but it's good piece of work :P
Awesome job Darwin! You're drawings are improving much faster than I anticipated. I'm surprised to see how close your style is to Rex's now, keep it up!
Ok it's hard to compare you and rex since he had time to improve and you are quite new and you stil need time to get better. All I can say is that I don't like her pussy the way it is and the missing throat makes the whole pic look weird/unproportional. I personally think that it would be best when you were actually helping both: rex' and robert's sites so everyone would profit. More quantity for naruto and better quality for one piece. Keep it up!
WOW Darwin!! You are improving your drawing skills so fast! REX + DARWIN = PERFECTION.
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